Time Loop Ch 1

Time Loop Ch 1

Time loop

I woke up in the inferno, flames licking at my 

face. Mark, my husband, stood frozen for

second, then bolted towards Emily, his high 

school sweetheart, who had fallen. He didn’t 

even glance at me, his pregnant wife

He came back for me, but it was too late

Emily was gone

He blamed me, said I’d faked weakness

clinging to him, costing precious seconds. He 

wouldn’t even let our daughter call him Dad.” 

Six years later, when time travel became

reality, he jumped at the chance, obsessed 

with going back

Sarah, if you hadn’t used the baby to guilt 

  1. me. I would’ve saved Emily first.” 

Even Lily, our daughter, turned on me

If you hadn’t killed Aunt Emily, Dad wouldn’t 

hate me!” 

Facing their scorn, I decided to go back too

This time, I’d save myself. I owed Mark 

nothing

The time machine’s nausea faded, replaced 

by scorching heat. I opened my eyes to see 

Mark, jaw tight, standing over me

He looked at me, then ran to Emily, who’d 

fallen

Flames roared around me. I scrambled 

towards the exit

Just as I was about to escape Mark carrying 

Emily, rushed past. Emily, panicked, shoved 

me back

I fell, a collapsing cabinet pinning me. Pain 

seared through me, but I pushed the debris 

away, crawling towards freedom

Gasping for air in the safe zone, I watched 

Mark, holding Emily, walk towards me, his 

eyes.cold

Sarah, you could’ve gotten out yourself? You 

waited, hoping I’d rescue you, so I wouldn’t 

have time to save Emily.” 

His coldness extinguished the heat of the fire

He didn’t know I’d also traveled back

Planning on running to Mom and Dad again? 

Fine, but leave Emily out of it, or forget about 

our marriage!” 

I touched my stomach, speaking calmly

Mark, let’s get a divorce.” 

He froze, staring, then scoffed, I don’t have 

time for your games.” 

I’m serious. Let’s divorce.” 

Mark’s biggest regrets were not saving Emily 

and marrying me. I’d fix both

He glared, voice hardening

I know your game. You’re using this divorce 

threat to make Mom and Dad hate Emily even 

more because I saved her first.” 

Marriage isn’t a joke, Sarah. Stop with the 

drama. Let’s go, I’ll take you to the hospital.” 

He reached for me, warning me to stop

My stomach cramped. As I reached up, Emily 

grabbed Mark’s hand

Mark, Coco isn’t doing well. I think he 

inhaled too much smoke. Can we take him to 

the vet?” 

Seeing her tears, Mark instantly agreed. Then 

he remembered me

Emily followed his gaze, pleading, Sarah

you’re not badly hurt, can you wait? Coco 

means the world to me.” 

Coco was Mark’s gift to Emily, a parrot

I’ll call an ambulance. After Coco’s okay, I’ll 

meet you at the hospital.” 

I nodded, Go.” 

He looked surprised, but seeing Emily’s 

distress, he drove off

I lifted my coat, revealing bloodsoaked 

fabric

The ambulance finally arrived. At the hospital

the doctor examined me, his face grim

Mrs. Miller, I’m sorry, it’s too late. You’ve lost 

the baby.” 

My last pregnancy hadn’t ended this way 

because Mark had rescued me first. Lily had 

distent father Shold ooked 

grown up with a distant father. She’d asked 

why other kids got gifts from their dads, while 

Mark never even bought her a toy

I’d overheard him tell her, Don’t call me Dad

I won’t acknowledge you. I’ll compensate you 

in other ways.” 

He’d shown her a cherished feather. If 

everyone hadn’t been rushing your mom to 

the hospital the day you were born, Coco 

wouldn’t have gotten lost. Emily must hate 

  1. me. I failed to save her, and now Coco too.” 

If I had another chance, I’d save her and 

Coco, even if it meant losing my own child.” 

Tears welled. I hadn’t planned on keeping this 

baby. I accepted the loss calmly

Г 

My friend brought the divorce papers. Mark 

arrived, holding toys

Saw these, thought they were cute. Early 

gifts for the baby.” 

He arranged them, smiling

Did you find Coco?” 

He nodded

Time Loop Novel

Time Loop Novel

Status: Ongoing

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